Assignment Editing Short Article Writing by Fazli Mawla Haafiz - Before Editing

 The image below is the original script before entering the editing.

                                                        

This post is the original article before entering the overall editing stage by me as the Editor of the Short Article written by Fazli Mawla Haafiz.

You can see a lot of mistakes in writing, and of course it makes the reader confused in reading the short article. Starting from sentences that are not suitable for use, to sentences that don't need to be in the short article